高考英语作文

今天给各位分享高考英语作文的知识，其中也会对"Good beginning is half done." Please let us cherish the short spring进行解释，如果能碰巧解决你现在面临的问题，别忘了关注本站，现在开始吧！

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1、高考英语作文

2、助力高考英语作文得高分的24篇优质话题作文（建议收藏）

3、如何写一篇优秀的高中英语作文？

　　高考英语作文（通用10篇）

在平时的学习、工作或生活中，大家都写过作文吧，作文是人们把记忆中所存储的有关知识、经验和思想用书面形式表达出来的记叙方式。相信很多朋友都对写作文感到非常苦恼吧，以下是小编整理的高考英语作文（通用10篇），欢迎阅读与收藏。

One day， a little girl fell down onto the ground，the boy went over and wanted to help her up。But his mother stopped him and said： dont do that，otherwise， others will think it was you who knocked her down。Another day， the mother was surprised to see that her son just let the fallen older all be。And the son said to his mother：if I had the strip brought up， you will find that I did。I disagreed with mothers picture。I think the parents should let the children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble。we are living in the society which is the big family for all of us。we should care for each other and help each other。

When talking about the course which impresses me the most， I will certainly choose Basic

Chemical Experiment。 As a student of science， I am always fascinated with the magic in test tubes， and from this course I gained more than pure knowledge。

To begin with， this course provides us opportunities to put theories into practices。 The experiments helped us testify and better understand what we have learned in books。 Besides， by designing experimental procedures of own， we became more flexible and innovative。

Moreover， I also developed other skills that required outside labs through this course。 For example，

to be focused and careful when proceeding a task， to be patient and calm when facing failures， and to communicate properly when you need someone else to cooperate。 These can be very valuable assets to your life。

Basic Chemical Experiment influenced me not only on academic field but also on daily affairs，

therefore it’s the most impressing course to me。

在谈到这让我印象深刻的大部分过程中，我肯定会选择基础化学实验。随着科学的学生，我一直着迷于魔术的试

管，并从这个当然，我不是纯粹知识获得了更多。要使用开始，这当然给我们提供了机会，把理论付诸实践。实验帮助我们见证并更好地了解我们所学到的.书本。此外，通过设计自己的实验过程中，我们变得更加灵活和创新。此外，我公司还开发了其他的技能，通过这门课程要求以外的实验室。例如，在进行任务时集中，细致，耐心，当面对失败冷静，当你需要别人合作，以正常通信。这是非常有价值的资产，你的生活。

基础化学实验对我的影响不仅在学术领域，而且在日常事务，所以这是最令人印象深刻的当然给我。

Miss you so much, the spring is in my heart! I call you in winter, the flowers and plants of the earth know my heart.

How could the end of the cold shut my love for you, eager to spring scenery covered my heart. Your smile is like a song, moistens my love for you! Your figure is like a river, moistens my love. Sun sets, stars out, year after year, usher in the dawn each were shining brilliantly, and off the innumerable cloud all the evening, but remained motionless, I wait for you a winter love is!

You are like a ray of sunshine in winter, stroking my face and heart. You wake up the sleeping earth, and make the whole world full of energy.

The rain silently, mingled with underground, dripping on the land, to give the earth a little moist, make the earth vitality. You let leaves fully absorb the rain which nature gives.

The birds are singing in the branches back, as if to pour out your arrival. Grass in the wind dancing to music performed by you, as if in a welcome meeting for you. Through the windblow, I saw the wonderful rain, see you in the rain. Proverb says: "Rain in spring is as precious as oil". It is no wonder that the flowers begin to bloom after the spring rain.

Let us embrace the touching spring, put the dreams of the spring into their full lofty sentiments, and sprinkle with sweat infiltration in the spring of faith, to the autumn harvest fruitful hope!

Dear Lucy,

How are you doing? I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school. Recently, our class plan to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the old there and enrich our afterschool life. As the vice monitor, I would like to invite you to come with us.

Here are some details about this activity. To begin with, we will leave the school by bus at 8:00 AM and return at 5:00 PM. Besides, there will be a lot of activities such as making Chinese dumplings and giving performances, which will be not only meaningful but also interesting.

Hopefully, you would like the plan and join us. I have the confidence that we will have a great time there. Thanks for reading my letter. I am looking forward to your reply and your decision.

Best wishes,

A robbery happened near the Bank of China on March 8th, 2002. A woman was robbed of her money by a tall robber with long brown hair after she took money out of the bank. The robber was riding a motorbike, wearing a mask and carrying a gun in hand. In three minutes, the policeman arrived at the spot and fought with the robber who tried to run away with the money. After half an hours fight, the robber was shot to death at the turning of the street. The woman was very grateful to the police. Please be careful while going out.

There happened a robbery near the Bank of China on March 8th,2002. The details were that a scoundrel with a gun was robbing a women of money. The scoundrel had long brown hair, his face covered and rode a motorcar. He tried to take money out of the womans pocket. But the police arrived three minutes later, fighting with the scoundrel. The scoundrel tried to run away with money, but he failed. After half an hour, the scoundrel was shot by a policeman at the corner of the street. The women appreciated the police. Everybody should be careful while going out.

Many people, especially those who think they are not as talented as others, tend to give up in their undertakings and thus complain about life. Such people will certainly end up getting nowhere. Notice that most successful people are not unlike us. What makes them stand out is their devotedness to the job they are doing, which is typical of the story of Li Dahua, a neighbor of mine.

Dahua was brought up in a poor family. Since he didnt do well in school, he joined his father in collecting garbage for a living soon after he graduated from elementary school. His neighbors shook their heads whenever they saw him, thinking that this boy would by no means carve out a bright future. Years passed by, and Dahua kept collecting garbage, but he took one step further. Through books he knew how to sort out the waste he had collected and have it recycled. You know what? He has set up a recycling factory and become the richest man in town! His success proves the ancient Chinese saying: "There must be a use for my talent."

University is a place that provides a number of interesting activities to eich our life on campus. In the two years, I have attended a couple of activities such as football club and reading society. The most benefited one popping into my mind is the sports meeting last month.

First of all, sports meeting offers a great opportunity to draw students’ attention from busy studies to the sports field. As students, most of our time is killed in the classroom and library. However, doing sports could be seen as a relaxing ingredient in tedious study life.

Secondly, as a member of football club, I attended the football game that day. I enjoyed the feeling of being united. During the game, we encouraged each other when we felt frustrated; we cheered for each other when we scored a goal. All these taught me to be more and more team-oriented.

Lastly, doing sports benefits to our physical health. Increasingly sedentary lifestyle causes laziness and possibility of obesity. Therefore, this sports meeting on campus mobilized our students to enjoy the fun of sports.

This is the campus activity that has benefited not only me but also most of the students.

大学是一个提供了许多有趣的活动，丰富我们的校园生活的地方。在两年中，我参加了几个活动，如足球俱乐部和阅读社会。最受益1弹出到我的脑海里是运动会的最后一个月。首先，运动会提供了一个很好的机会，吸引学生的注意力从繁忙的研究，体育领域。作为学生，我们的大部分时间被杀死在教室和图书馆。然而，做运动可以看作是在枯燥的学习生活轻松的成分其次，作为足球俱乐部的一员，我那天参加了足球比赛。我喜欢被团结的.感觉。在游戏过程中，我们相互鼓励，当我们感到沮丧;我们欢呼对方的时候，我们打进一球。这些都教我要更多注重团队。最后，做运动好处，我们的身体健康。越来越多的久坐的生活方式会导致懒惰和肥胖的可能性。因此，这种运动会在校园动员我们的学生享受运动的乐趣。

这是受益不仅是我，而且大部分学生的校园活动

Rose is my roommate, classmate and my best friend in my college. She has a round face and a little plump. One can always find a nice smile on her face, which reflects her amiable and pleasant character. Our friendship attributes to her great influence on me.

In terms of study, she is good at English, while English is not my cup of tea. When I am confused about teacher’s explanation of texts, she always interprets them to me in an explicit way. I really appreciate her help. Besides, she also imparts me a few language learning tips and recommendations which arouse my learning interest.

In addition, in the leisure time, she helps me a lot as well. Because I am not the local student and my hometown is far away from here, sometimes I feel homesick. However, I always have Rose on my side. Her accompany gives me great comfort.

I feel so lucky that I could have such a good friend, who teaches me and help me in my study and leisure life, so she is the classmate that has influenced me most in college.

罗斯是我的室友，同学和我的大学我最好的朋友。她有一个圆圆的脸和饱满一点。人们总是可以找到在她的脸上，这反映了她的和蔼可亲和愉快的性格迷人的微笑。我们的友谊属性对我她的影响很大。在学习方面，她擅长英语，而英语是不是我的那杯茶。当我感到困惑的文本老师的解释，她总是他们解释给我一个明确的方式。我真的很感谢她的.帮助。此外，她还传授我一些语言学习的技巧和建议，引起我的学习兴趣。此外，在闲暇时间，她帮助我很多东西为好。因为我不是本地的学生，我的家乡离这儿很远，有时候我想家。但是，我总是有玫瑰在我的身边。她的陪伴给了我很大的安慰。

我觉得自己很幸运，我能有这样的好朋友，谁教我，帮我在我的学习和休闲生活，所以她是一个已经最影响我的大学同学。

The Impact of Mobile Phone Use on Education

Spring is coming quietly by waking up everything slightly. All the creatures come back to life and start to grow. How wonderful the spring is! The rivers are running happily. The swallows are flying back from the south and singing. Meanwhile, some cute animals are busy with their new houses. And the sun shines brightly, directly to our frozen hearts. Everything is kissed by gently breeze. Listen! There are thousands of blossoms muttering with each other, giving off fragrance in the air. What colorful and harmonious scenes!

Spring is the beginning of the year which gives us energy and uncountbale chances. As teenagers, we must take advantage of the significant opportunity to realize our dreams. And we should keep it in mind that no pains,no gains. That is to say, the more we do, the better we will be. Thomas Alva. Edison ever said, "Our greatest weakness lies in giving up. The most certain way to succeed is just to try one more time." Under no circumstances should we give up our goals. No matter what happens, we are supposed to persist our dreams until the end of our life. In addition, we should be optimistic. Do not erase all the progress you have made due to one mistake.

As the proverb put it, "Good beginning is half done." Please let us cherish the short spring, and make our dream come true.

There are many people who think that wealth is better than health. I used to think so until one day I read a story about Howard Hughes. He was an American billionaire who got anything he wanted. However, in the last twenty years of his life, his health began to deteriorate and he was miserable. He had the best doctors and nurses. However, he could still find no relief. I realized that health is worth all the money in the world. If you have millions of dollars but your health is poor, you will not be able to do what you want to do. I would like to say dont hurt yourself trying to make money. Instead take care of your body and be happy with what you do have. Health is more important.

So I think health is more important than wealth. People can do nothing if they are always in poor health, let alone happiness. No matter we are rich or not, we can not ignore the importance of health.

很多人都认为财富比健康更重要。在读到Howard Hughes的故事之前，我也是这么认为的。Howard Hughes是美国的一个亿万富翁，能得到他想得到的任何东西。但是在他生命的最后二十年，他的身体变得很糟糕，他很悲惨。他有最好的`医生和护士，但仍得不到解脱。我意识到在这个世界上，健康的身体抵得上所有的金钱。因为即使你有百万美元但身体不健康，也不能做你想做的事情。我想说的是关心你的身体，对你所拥有的一切感到高兴，不要为挣钱损害你的身体。健康更重要。

所以，我认为健康比财富更重要。如果一个人身体总是不好，他什么也做不成，更不用谈幸福了。不管我们贫穷还是富有，都不能忽视健康的重要性。

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高考英语作文(精选3篇)10-08　　1、个人情况

Personal information范文Dear Mr. Smith,I'm Li Hua, a student from Hongxing Middle School. I'm writing to apply for the position of volunteer you advertised on China Daily.My experience has made me a qualified volunteer for your activity. First, I'm not only fluent in English but also have a good sense of cross-cultural communication, which enables me to provide a good service. Second, I am familiar with the history of the ancient Silk Road and know many stories about it. Third, as an outgoing member of the Students' Union, I have gained much experience in organizing social activities. In a word, I think I wouldn't let you down if I were given this opportunity.Looking forward to your early reply.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua亲爱的史密斯先生,我叫李华，是红星中学的学生。我写信是想应聘你们之前刊登在《中国日报》上提到的志愿者职位。我有足够的经验，能担任该活动的合格志愿者。首先，我不仅英语流利，而且有良好的跨文化交际意识，这使我能够提供良好的服务。第二，我熟悉古代丝绸之路的历史，知道很多相关的故事。第三，作为一个外向的学生会成员，我有很多组织社会活动的经验。总之，我认为如果我有这个机会，我不会让你失望。期待您的早日回复。祝好！你的朋友，李华

2、家庭、朋友与周围的人

Family,friends and people around范文Dear Peter,I'm Li Hua. Learning that you want to learn Mandarin and are in search of a teacher, I'd like to recommend my friend Li Ming to you.Li Ming is a 20-year-old young man who studies in Zhejiang University, majoring in Chinese. Not only can he speak Standard Mandarin, but also he is able to speak fluent English. Having been the winner of both English and Chinese speech contests several times, he was awarded the Image Ambassador of his university. So with a good command of English, he surely has no difficulty in communicating with you. And when knowing that you want someone to help you with Mandarin, he is quite willing to offer help.I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendation into consideration.Yours truly,Li Hua亲爱的彼得,我是李华。得知你想学中文，正在找老师，我想向你推荐我的朋友李明。李明是一个 20 岁的年轻人，在浙江大学学习中文。他不仅能说一口标准的普通话，而且能说一口流利的英语。曾多次获得英语和汉语演讲比赛的冠军，并被授予“学校形象大使”的称号。正因为有良好的英语水平，所以他和你交流不会有什么困难。如果你需要的话，他会很乐意帮你的。如果您能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。你的朋友，李华

3、周围的环境

Personal environments范文Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Having learned that you're looking for volunteers to monitor the water quality of the river, I'd like to be one of them.In my hometown, my family have lived on a river for decades. I know how important the river is to people. The river to us is what milk to a baby. That is why I'm willing to join you in helping protect the river from being polluted through monitoring its water quality. I promise I will spare no effort to do the job and do it well.I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity to do something for us all.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua尊敬的先生或女士:我是李华，一名来自中国的交换生。得知你们正在寻找志愿者来监测这条河的水质，我想加入你们。在我的家乡，我的家人已经在河边生活了几十年。我知道这条河对人们是多么重要。这条河对我们来说就像牛奶对婴儿一样。这就是为什么我愿意和你们一起，通过监测河流的水质来保护河流不受污染。我保证我将不遗余力地做好这项工作。如果您能给我机会，让我为大家做点什么，我将不胜感激。期待您早日回复。你的朋友，李华

4、日常活动

Daily routines范文Dear Peter,I'm glad that you will come to study in our school as an exchange student. You want to learn about our daily life in school. I'd like to take Monday for example.As boarding school students, we get up at 5:40 am, doing morning running and reading until 7:00 am. Four classes, Chinese, Maths, Physics and English, are arranged from 7:40 to 12:00. There are three classes lasting from 2:30 pm to 5:00 pm. School is over at 5:00 pm, which is the time to throw ourselves into the after-school activities, like doing sports or reading in the library. At night, having finished our homework, we will stay in the dormitory, sweeping, washing clothes and chatting. Then, we'll go to bed before 10:00 pm.Though we are busy, we feel fulfilled at school every day.Yours truly,Li Hua亲爱的彼得,我很高兴你作为交换生来我们学校学习，在这里我就以星期一为例，让你了解一下我们在学校的日常生活。作为寄宿学校的学生，我们早上 5 点 40 起床，开始晨跑和早读，一直到早上 7 点。语文、数学、物理和英语四节课安排在 7:40 到 12:00。下午 14:00 到 17：00 有三节课。下午 17：00 放学，之后就到了我们课外活动的时间，如做运动或在图书馆阅读。晚上，做完作业，我们会呆在宿舍、扫地、洗衣服、聊天。然后，我们在晚上 10 点前睡觉。虽然我们很忙，但我们每天都很充足。你的朋友，李华

5、学校生活

School life范文Today, a high school delegation from the UK came to our school to have a cultural exchange activity, which offered us a good opportunity to learn more about each other.At first, we showed the delegation around our cultural corridor where pictures and art works about Chinese and English culture were exhibited. Then a cultural lecture was held at the lecture hall, during which students from both countries introduced the development of their own culture. Finally, the art performance that represented Chinese and English culture turned out to be the highlight of the activity.Through the cultural exchange activity, we have enhanced the understanding of different cultures and promoted the friendship between the two schools.今天，一个来自英国的高中代表团来到我们学校进行文化交流活动，这给了我们一个很好的机会去了解彼此。首先，我们带领代表团参观了我们的文化走廊，那里展出了中国和英国文化的图片和艺术作品。随后在报告厅举行了一场文化讲座，来自两国的学生介绍了各自文化的发展。最后，代表中、英两国文化的艺术表演成为活动的亮点。通过文化交流活动，我们增进了对不同文化的了解，增进了两校之间的友谊。

6、兴趣与爱好

Interests and hobbies范文Dear Peter,How are you doing? Knowing that you are interested in astronomy, I'm writing to invite you to attend a lecture on astronomy given by Mr Green, a professor in a famous university.The three hour lecture will start at 8:30 am on Thursday next week in the lecture hall. Mr Green will not only talk about how life began on the Earth, but also introduce some great astronomers as well as the great achievements they have made. In addition, there will be a question-and-answer period when we can ask Mr Green any questions about astronomy.I believe we can learn more about astronomy from the lecture. Looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Li Hua亲爱的彼得,你好吗?得知你对天文学感兴趣，我写信是想邀请你去听一位著名大学教授格林先生关于天文学的讲座。讲座将于下周四上午 8:30 在报告厅开始，持续三小时。格林先生不仅会讲述地球上生命是如何开始的，而且还将介绍一些伟大的天文学家以及他们所取得的伟大成就。此外，还有一个问答环节，我们可以向格林先生提问任何有关天文学的问题。我相信我们可以从讲座中学到很多关于天文学的知识。期待你的到来。你的朋友，李华

7、个人感情

Emotions范文Hi, Painful,The problem you are facing is quite common among us teenagers. As a student of your age, I quite understand you, and I have some advice for you.Firstly, you should understand that your parents care about you. They often compare you with others perhaps because they want to let you be aware of your disadvantages and help you become better. If you don't like it, you can tell them about your feeling, saying that you feel stressed out. Secondly, you can tell them that you have the confidence to improve yourself in some areas. And meanwhile, let them know that you want to be yourself. I believe your parents can understand you and make some changes.Hope what I said above can be of some help to you.Yours,Li Hua嗨,痛苦,你所面临的问题在青少年中很普遍。作为同为这个年龄的学生，我很理解你并有一些建议给你。首先，你应该明白，你的父母关心你，经常拿你和别人比较，也许是因为他们想让你意识到自己的缺点，帮助你变得更好。如果你不喜欢，你可以告诉他们你的感受，说你感到压力很大。其次，你可以告诉他们，你有信心在某些方面提高自己。同时，让他们知道你想做你自己。我相信你的父母能理解你，并做出一些改变。希望我上面所说的对你有所帮助。你的朋友，李华

8、人际关系

Pinterpersonal relationships范文Dear Mike,I quite sympathize with you and understand how you feel. To help you save your friendship, here is my advice.To begin with, having been friends with him for so many years, you should trust him. Maybe something happened to him or his family. He probably doesn't want you to get involved in it. So it may be a good idea to give him some time to be alone. Finally, you can ask another friend to help find out the reason, which is the key to solving the problem.I hope these suggestions are helpful and that you and Tom are on good terms as before.Yours truly,Li Hua亲爱的迈克,我很同情你，也理解你的感受。为了帮助你挽救你的友谊，下面有几个建议。首先，和他做了这么多年的朋友，你应该相信他。也许他或他的家人出事了，他可能不想让你卷入其中。所以一个好办法是给他一些独处的时间。最后，问题的关键是，你可以请另一个朋友帮忙找出原因。我希望这些建议对你有帮助，希望你和汤姆像以前一样相处得很好。你的朋友，李华

9、计划与愿望

Plans and intentions范文Dear Alex,I'm glad to learn from your letter that you're going to pay a visit to Beijing recently.I'd like to be your guide and give my suggestions for your two-day trip here.On the morning of the first day, I suggest we climb the Great Wall, which is famous all over the world. After lunch, we can enjoy the Bird's Nest and the Water Cubic where the 2008 Olympics was held.Next day, I recommend we go sightseeing in the Peking University and Tsinghua University, the two most noted universities in China. We'd better visit the Forbidden City in the afternoon, so you can appreciate the splendid royal palace.I'd be happy if my suggestions are helpful to you. And I'm looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Li Hua亲爱的亚历克斯,我很高兴从你的信中得知你最近要来北京访问。我愿意做你的向导，给你两天的旅行提些建议。在第一天的早上，我建议去爬世界著名的长城。午餐后，我们可以欣赏 2008 举办奥运会的鸟巢和水立方。第二天，我推荐去参观中国最著名的两所大学——北京大学和清华大学。下午最好去参观故宫，这样你就能欣赏到富丽堂皇的皇宫了。如果我的建议对你有帮助，我会很高兴。期待着你的到来。你的朋友，李华

10、节假日活动

Festival,holidays and celebrations范文Dear Peter,With Chinese New Year drawing near, I'd like to invite you to celebrate it at my home.Chinese New Year is regarded as one of the most important festivals in my country. On the New Year's Eve, families and relatives will gather together to have a big dinner. When it comes to the reunion dinner, people often think of dumplings. But actually, the reunion dinner is usually served with abundant foods, such as fish, chicken, beef aswell as many other dishes. Some foods can have special meanings expressing people's good wishes for the coming new year. All my family will be excited about your coming. I'm sure you'll have a good time with us.Looking forward to your coming.Yours truly,Li Hua亲爱的彼得,随着中国新年的临近，我想邀请你来我家庆祝。中国新年被认为是我国最重要的节日之一。在除夕夜，家人和亲戚会聚在一起吃一顿丰盛的晚餐。说到团圆饭，人们经常想到饺子。但实际上，团圆饭通常有丰富的食物，如鱼、鸡、牛肉以及许多其他菜肴，一些具有特殊意义的食物用来表达人们对新年的美好祝愿。我全家都会为你的到来而兴奋。我相信你会和我们玩得很开心的。期待你的到来。你的朋友，李华

11、购物

Shopping范文Dear Mr.Wang,Knowing that our library is going to buy books,I'd like to offer some suggestions.What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.In addition to reading for knowledge,we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books:literary books.Classic works,written by masters,present great thoughts through fascinat ing language and stories.They not only offer us joy and excitement,but also encourage us to think critically.I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendations.Yours sincerely,Li Hua亲爱的王先生,知道我们图书馆将要新购一批书籍，我想对此提出一些建议。我们最需要的是科普书。科普书籍一般以简单有趣的方式解释自然的基本原理，能帮助我们更好地理解科学，激发我们对科学的好奇心。除了为知识而阅读，我们还为了乐趣和灵感而阅读。这也是我推荐另一类书籍的原因:文学书籍。写经典作品的大师们，通过迷人的语言和故事表达伟大的思想。它们不仅给我们带来欢乐，而且鼓励我们批判性思考。如果您能考虑我的建议，我会很高兴。你的朋友，李华

12、饮食

Food and drink范文Welcome to “Mum's Restaurant”. We are making every effort to offer you various dishes, which are perfect in color, aroma and taste. The dishes we prepare are not only delicious, but also rich in nutrition.For the vegetables we buy on the market are planted on the organic farm and the meat is also fresh, which guarantees the quality of the dishes. In particular, we don't use any nonfood additives. What's more, recently we promote some special dishes and you will be given a 15 percent discount on them. We promise that you have never had such delicious dishes before. Come and try, and you will not regret!欢迎光临“妈妈餐厅”。我们努力为您提供色香味俱全的各种菜肴。我们做的菜不仅美味，而且营养丰富。为了保证菜的质量，我们在市场上购买的蔬菜都是种植在有机农场的，肉类也是新鲜的。特别是，我们不使用任何非食品添加剂。更重要的是，最近我们推出了一些特别的菜，会有 15% 的折扣。我们保证你从来没有吃过这么美味的菜。来试试吧，你不会后悔的!

13、健康

Health范文Nowadays, many students go to school without having breakfast. Some of them buy the fried food served by the small food stalls at the school gate, which will do harm to their health in the long run.In order to solve this problem, our school works out a healthy breakfast plan together with the students' parents. Every morning from now on, our school canteen provides students with different kinds of healthy food. This plan guarantees that every student can have breakfast in time.On behalf of the Students'Union, I call on every student to have healthy breakfast regularly, so as to benefit your health as well as your study.现在有许多学生不吃早餐就去上学；还有一些人在学校门口的小吃摊上买油炸食品，这从长远来对他们的健康有害。为了解决这个问题，我们学校和学生的父母一起制定了一个健康的早餐计划。从现在开始，我们学校食堂每天早上都会为学生提供各种各样的健康食品。这个计划保证每个学生都能按时吃早餐。我代表学生会，呼吁每个学生定期吃健康的早餐，这样有利于你的健康和学习。

14、天气

Weather范文Dear Albert,I'm glad to know that you're planning to visit our city and now I'd like to tell you something about it.Chengdu, the capital city of Sichuan Province, is located at the western edge of the Sichuan Basin and the climate here is pleasant all year round. With abundant natural resources, it is the birthplace of Sichuan cuisine, in which the Sichuan pepper is the most unique and important spice. Besides, there are many tourist attractions worth visiting. For example, the Dujiangyan, an irrigation system constructed by the State of Qin, contributes to the agricultural development of Chengdu. In addition, Chengdu is home to giant pandas and I'm sure you will fall in love with them.Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Hua亲爱的艾伯特,我很高兴知道你计划参观我的家乡，现在我想告诉你一些关于它的事情。成都，是四川省的省会城市，位于四川盆地的西部边缘，这里终年气候宜人，自然资源丰富。它都是川菜的发源地，而川椒则是川菜最独特、最重要的香料。此外，这里还有许多值得参观的旅游景点。如，一个秦国建造，为成都的农业发展做出了贡献的灌溉系统——都江堰。此外，成都还是大熊猫的故乡，我相信你会爱上它们的。期待你的到来。你的朋友，李华

15、文娱与体育

Entertainment and sports范文Dear Jay,How is everything going? Knowing that you are also a fan of Jay Chou, I would like to invite you to go to his concert in our city on Thursday night.Jay Chou is a famous Chinese pop singer, whose Blue and White Porcelain is one of my favorite songs. I recommended it to you before, and you said you liked it. Besides, you said you also liked his unique voice. I believe the concert will be a perfect chance to enjoy his music and know more about him.I wonder if it will be convenient for you to meet me at the school gate at six p.m. this Thursday. I would appreciate it if you could go with me together.Yours sincerely,Li Hua亲爱的杰,一切都好吗?知道你也是周杰伦的粉丝，我想邀请你周四晚上去我们城市听他的演唱会。周杰伦是中国著名的流行歌手，他的《青花瓷》是我最喜欢的歌曲之一。我以前向你推荐过，你说你喜欢。另外，你说你也喜欢他独特的声音。我相信音乐会将是一个欣赏他音乐和了解他的完美机会。我想知道这个星期四下午六点你是否方便在学校门口接我。如果你能和我一起去，我会很感激。你的朋友，李华

16、旅游与交通

Travel and transport范文Dear Tom,Believe it or not, now I'm writing to share my traveling experience in Guilin with you. It's in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, China, famous for its mountains and waters.I have been here for five days, during which time not only did I enjoy the fascinating scenery like the magical terraces, unique mountains and clear rivers, but also I tried the traditional weaving of Zhuang people. What impressed me most was the spectacular folk-song-singing competition on the Lijiang River, which attracted thousands of visitors and locals.Guilin enjoys a world-wide reputation for its beautiful scenery, so it's well worth visiting.I dare say a foreigner failing to Guilin hasn't really been to China. I strongly recommend you visit it after finishing your study.Yours truly,Jack亲爱的汤姆,信不信由你，现在我要和你分享我在桂林的旅行经历。它位于中国广西壮族自治区，以山水闻名。我在这里已经五天了，在这五天里，我不仅欣赏了神奇的梯田、独特的山川和清澈的河流等迷人的风景，还尝试了壮族的传统编织。给我印象最深的是漓江上壮观的民歌比赛，吸引了成千上万的游客和当地人。桂林以其美丽的风景享誉世界，所以很值得一游。我敢说，没去过桂林的外国人就没有真正去过中国。我强烈建议你完成学业后去参观。你的朋友，杰克

17、语言学习

Language learning范文Dear Mr. Smith,I'm writing to invite you to be the judge of the coming English film dubbing competition in our school.To inspire us to learn English and improve our speaking ability, an English film dubbing competition is to be held at two o'clock this Friday afternoon in the school hall. Competitors will show their talents for imitation and the exact understanding of the characters in the film. You've been the judge of such competitions for several times and have much experience. So we would be honored to have you with us in the competition. Please drop me a line to let me know your decision.We're looking forward to your coming.　　Yours,Li Hua亲爱的史密斯先生,我写信是想邀请你担任我们学校即将举行的英语电影配音比赛的评委。为了激励我们学习英语，提高我们的口语能力，英语电影配音比赛将于本周五下午两点在学校礼堂举行。参赛选手将展示他们的模仿才能，以及对电影角色的准确理解。你曾多次担任此类比赛的评委，经验丰富。所以如果你能和我们一起参加比赛，我们感到万分荣幸。请写信告诉我你的决定。期待着你的到来。你的朋友，李华

18、自然

Nature范文Hello, everyone,I'm honored to show you around Dujiangyan tomorrow. To help you have a knowledge of it, I'd like to make a brief introduction to it.Dujiangyan, with a long history of over 2000 years, is an ancient irrigation system situated in the Chengdu Plain, Sichuan Province. Once the plain was often flooded by the Min River which rushed down from the Min mountains. Therefore, Li Bing, one of the governors for the state of Qin, together with his son, headed the construction of the irrigation system, Dujiangyan. It not only acts as a way to prevent flood and irrigate the crops but also a kind of transportation. Now it's listed as a World Heritage Site as well as a AAAAA tourist attraction. Meanwhile, it's the oldest irrigation system in the world that is still in use today.I bet that your visiting it in person will leave you a wonderful impression.Yours,Li Hua大家好,我很荣幸明天带你们参观都江堰。为了帮助你们了解它，我想在这里做一个简单的介绍。都江堰位于四川省成都市平原，是一个有着 2000 多年悠久历史的古老灌溉系统。从前，平原经常被从岷山奔流而下的岷江淹没。因此，秦国的一位官员李冰和他的儿子主持了都江堰灌溉系统的建设。它不仅是一种防止洪水和灌溉农作物的方法，也是一种交通工具。现在它被列为世界文化遗产和 AAAAA 级旅游景点。同时，它是世界上至今仍在使用的最古老的灌溉系统。我相信你们参观后，一定会有个美好的印象。你的朋友，李华

19、世界与环境

The world and environment范文Hello, Tom,How are you doing? I'm honored to be invited to my foreign teacher's this weekend. Invited to pay a visit to a foreigner for the first time, I'm worried that some of my manners may appear impolite in her eyes due to cultural difference. So I'm asking for your advice.Would you please tell me some rules of etiquette needed to obey? As a student of hers, I think it's good manners to bring a gift for her. I'd appreciate it if you could tell me what kind of present I should take. Additionally, do you think it's necessary for me to dress up for the visit?Under your guidance, I believe I will have a good time.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours truly,Li Hua你好,汤姆,最近好吗?我很荣幸这个周末被邀请到自己外教家做客。因为第一次被邀请去拜访一个外国人，所以我担心由于文化差异，自己的一些举止可能在她的眼中显得不礼貌。因此我需要征求你的建议。你能告诉我一些需要遵守的礼仪规则吗?作为她的学生，我认为给她带礼物是最基本的礼仪。如果你能告诉我应该带什么样的礼物，我将不胜感激。另外，你认为我有必要打扮一下去拜访吗?有你的建议，我会很开心。期待你早日回复。你的朋友，李华

20、科普知识与现代技术

Popular science and modern technology范文Science and Technology Influence LifeAs we can see, science and technology have been deeply influencing our life. Take our school for example.Now there are several HD-cameras monitoring the whole campus in case of emergency or school bullying. At meal time, we can watch TV news in the dinning hall, learning the latest international and domestic events.Not only can our teachers use multimedia equipment to make their classes more lively, but also they can mark papers on the computer, which greatly improves the efficiency of paper-scoring.Additionally, we can do many things conveniently, such as paying by Alipay, getting food by card, going to school by shared bike and so on.In a word, it is the development of science and technology that makes such a comfortable and convenient life available to us.科学技术影响生活正如我们所看到的，科学技术已经深深地影响了我们的生活。以我们学校为例：现在有几个 HD-camera 监控整个校园，以防发生紧急情况或校园欺凌事件。吃饭的时候，我们可以在餐厅里看电视新闻，学习最新的国际和国内事件。我们的老师不仅可以使用多媒体设备让课堂更生动，而且可以在电脑上批改作业，这也大大提高了工作效率。此外，我们做事情也变得方便，如支付宝支付、用校园卡购买食物、骑自行车上学等等。总而言之，正是科技的发展使我们能够拥有如此舒适、方便的生活。

21、热点话题

Topical issues范文Hello, Steven,Knowing that you are a true fan of Wu Jing, I'd like to invite you to join me in watching a movie starred by him. His latest film Wolf Warriors 2 will be on at Guangming Cinema on October 27, 2017.The action movie tells the story of a military man named Leng Feng. He was dismissed by his troops. Then he was determined to spend the rest of his life wandering on the sea. However, by accident, he got involved in a war in Africa. The action scenes in Wolf Warriors 2 are said to be more thrilling than those in Wolf Warriors and I bet it will be a visual feast for the audience.Hoping you can enjoy it with me and looking forward to your early reply.Yours truly,Li Hua你好，史蒂文，我知道你是吴京的忠实粉丝，所以想邀请你一起看一部吴京主演的电影。他的最新电影《战狼 2》将于 2017 年 10 月 27 日在光明影院上映。这部动作片讲述了一个叫冷峰的军人的故事。他被部队开除了。于是，他决心在海上漂泊，度过余生。然而，一次偶然的机会，他卷入了非洲的一场战争。据说《战狼 2》的动作场面比《战狼》更刺激，我敢打赌这将是一场视觉盛宴。希望你能和我一起去看，期待你早日回复。你的朋友，李华

22、历史与地理

History and geography范文Hello everyone,I'm Li Hua, a student from Class One, Senior Three. It's my honor to be here to talk about protecting cultural relics.As is known to us all, cultural relics are treasures that our ancestors created for the whole nation. They are meaningful and valuable to all of us. Once destroyed, they will never come back. Therefore, it's our responsibility to protect them.What should we do to protect cultural relics? On the one hand, I think we should improve people's awareness of protecting them, letting them know that destroying cultural relics means destroying our culture. On the other hand, every one of us should live by a principle that by no means will we sell or buy cultural relics.In a word, let's make efforts to protect cultural relics together.That's all. Thanks for listening!大家好,我叫李华，是高三一班的学生。我很荣幸在这里和大家讨论保护文物。众所周知，文物是我们的祖先为整个国家创造的财富。它们对我们所有人都是有意义、有价值的。文物一旦被摧毁，就再也不会回来了。因此，保护它们是我们的责任。我们应该做些什么来保护文物?一方面，我认为应该提高人们保护文物的意识，让他们知道破坏文物意味着破坏我们的文化。另一方面，我们每个人都应该本着这样的原则生活：我们绝不出售或购买文物。总之，让我们一起努力保护文物。谢谢聆听!

23、社会

Society范文Dear Bruce,I'm glad to hear from you. It's true that people in my hometown have become richer than ever before through the development of modern agriculture and I'd like to share their recipe with you.To be honest, my hometown used to be very poor. In response to the government's policy to enrich people, we have grown organic vegetables and fruit, which are sold throughout our country with the help of the Internet. Actually, what benefits us most is the ecotourism that we have developed to attract visitors to experience the joy of the harvest. Additionally, we also raise fish, goats, pigs and cattle with vegetables, whose meat is more delicious and better sold than those fed with fodder.Looking forward to your coming one day.Yours sincerely,Li Hua亲爱的布鲁斯,很高兴收到你的来信。的确，在我的家乡，人们通过现代农业的发展，变得比以往任何时候都富有，我想在这里和你们分享一些他们的日常食谱。说实话，我的家乡过去很穷。为了响应政府的“富民”政策，我们种植了有机蔬菜和水果，并通过互联网销售到全国各地。实际上，最让我们受益的是我们开发的生态旅游，吸引游客来体验收获的喜悦。此外，我们还用蔬菜养鱼、山羊、猪和牛，它们的肉比用饲料喂养的更美味，卖得更好。期待有一天你的到来。你的朋友，李华

24、文学与艺术

Literature and art范文Dear Tom,Learning that you are interested in Chinese folk art, especially the weaving art, I'm glad to tell you something about it.The weaving art, dating back to over 1,000 years, is one of the Chinese native arts passed down by craftsmen from one generation to the next. Since the weaving art is popular among common people, the weaving materials are mainly from nature. Bamboos, silk threads, or some other vine plants are usually used to make chairs, pack baskets, curtains, baskets, decorations and so on.Chinese knotting is generally regarded as one of the most outstanding decorations of the weaving art. The reason is that it's not only a beautiful decoration with various shapes, it also symbolizes good luck and prosperity.Here is a book on Chinese weaving art for you. I hope the book can help you know more about it.Yours truly,Li Hua亲爱的汤姆,得知你对中国民间艺术，尤其是编织艺术感兴趣，我很乐意给你介绍一下。织造艺术是中国传统手工艺人代代相传的艺术，已有一千多年的历史。由于编织艺术在民间很受欢迎，所以编织材料主要来自大自然。竹子、丝线或其他一些藤本植物，通常用来制作椅子、篮子、窗帘、篮子、装饰品等。中国结一般被认为是纺织艺术中最杰出的装饰之一。因为它不仅是一种形状各异的美丽装饰，而且象征着好运和繁荣。这是一本关于中国编织艺术的书，希望能帮助你更多地了解它。你的朋友，李华　　对于高中生来说，通过什么方法能够提高自己的英语作文水平？

高中里学的英语内容还比较有限，单纯靠课本里的东西怕是不够用的。可参考：如何利用简易读物学习英语？ - 英语自学

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感谢知友们的支持！我又重新回答了一遍这个问题，请看怎么快速提高高考英语作文？

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月考作文，这次单科总分考了141哈哈哈哈

虽然handwriting还是硬伤

以下为原回答：

答主是高中生，英语不算特别优秀，但是在作文方面确实是有挺多技巧的。（初中也可以用哦）书写：推荐写“衡水体”（网上有教程），又大又圆的字体，让阅卷老师看起来舒服。并不是很难练，坚持一段时间就可以有很大进步了。内容：符合主题当然是前提，所以务必仔细审题，每一个信息点都要写到。此外也要注意文章篇幅的把握，一般写三段，开头结尾各3行，中间一段7~8行，一般要把答题卡整一版都写满。句型：尽量不要用仅仅是主谓宾结构的简单句，学会用高大上的句型让你的作文变得秀起来。用介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句、分词作定语或状语、only/so...that引导的倒装句等等，或者把几个主动句改成被动句，都会让老师眼前一亮。词汇：把文章中常见的、普通的词汇换成高级的词汇，这是最难也是最关键的一步。比如，当你要说I think...的时候，可以写"from my perspective,..."或者"As far as I'm concerned,..."；文章中的过渡词不要用first,second，把它们变成"To begin with,...,In addition/Moreover/...,Last but not least"这样的短语；"should"换成"ought to"或者"be supposed to do"；"useful"换成"beneficial"等等。

高考的作文就是从这四个角度评分的，所以把这四点搞定，写出21分以上的作文不是难事。当然嘴上功夫容易，要实践才行。上课认真听课，掌握好老师讲解的重要句型，课后多积累高级词汇，同时有空就练练字，相信你也能写出优秀的英语作文！

下面是我们这次期末考试的作文，我拿了22分，应该是最高分了（我们学校给分不会超过22分）。关于2、3、4点可以参考一下，但是书写和卷面还是不够好看，所以大家也可以把这个当做反面教材（捂脸）

先来看看高中英语作文的得分标准：

一篇作文的得分是由4个部分构成的：内容+结构+用词用句+卷面。总的来说，满分25分的作文，得分在16—20分之间才能算得上优秀。具体说的话，内容占6分，结构占5分，用词用句占1~3分，卷面占6分。

我就说一下这4个部分分别怎么拿分？

【内容分】提分方法

题目给的所有信息都写全、不要漏点，没有反社会言论。

【结构分】提分方法

结构分主要看你的段落分配得是不是合理，还有你用的连词是不是顺畅。当拿到一个提纲作文时，我们首先要根据背景和提示内容分段。高考作文分成三段来写最清晰简单、容易得到结构分。所以为了节省空间，我就直接说一下如何把题干写成三段式作文了哈。

1、第一段，可以分成两句，一长一短，其中长句写题干中交代的背景，短句为过渡句或是补充长句观点。

2、第二段：要分成四句话（一短+三长）来写。

3、第三段：结尾段应该写一长一短两句话，其中长句表达自己的观点，短句写个升华句。

【词句分】提分方法

运用“准确的单词+优秀多变的句型”得到的分数。词句这一块是整个作文最难的部分，考察的是学生的基本功，6分满分非常难得，但是拿1～3分还是相当容易的。

常用的词句：

For one thing,…. For another,…..

On the one hand,…. On the other hand,..

First and foremost,… Additionally/ Besides/ What's more,… Last but not least,…

To begin with,… Besides,…. What’s more,…. Finally,…

By the way,… （顺便一说，…）

Similarly/ Certainly，…（同样/当然，…）

To begin with(一开始),… Then(然后),… After that(之后),… Finally(最后),…

【卷面分】提分方法卷面字迹一定要工整，不能涂改（所以一定要打草稿啊）。这两个都达到了，卷面满分6分妥妥拿到～

本人高考全国一卷 145，12 月四级 684。这篇教大家搞定英语作文这件事。

首先，不要背模板！不要背模板！阅卷老师眼睛毒的很，如此流水线式的作文，基本 20/25 分封顶。

要知道得分技巧，就必须了解高考阅卷机制，并投其所好。从前我也以为这些信息对考生没有用，直到大考吃了哑巴亏。

高考作文的采分主要分为以下几个要素：题目，格式，书写，语法，篇幅，语体（前面是基础，往后是重头戏），句式，词汇，饱满度，层次与流利度，修辞——按对考生水平要求由低到高顺序——另外还有一点，阅卷人感受。

下面展开详谈。一切以全国卷老高考为例，全面解构高考作文（不限于句词）。新高考本质不变。

一、题目

如果有要求，千万不要忘记写题目。这点极大地牵涉到留给阅卷老师地第一印象，虽然不是什么大事，但如果翻车，就不是小事了。

题目第一行居中，简短有力，不要废话——题目不是正文，破题就完事了。

第一个词和最后一个词首字母要大写。在此基础上，一般实词首字母大写（动词、名词、形容词、副词、代词），虚词首字母小写（连词、介词、冠词），但长度超过 5 个字母的介词要大写，如 beneath, between, regarding 等。

但一个现实问题是，阅卷老师有一定可能不完全知道这些规则。他还以为你在量子大小写。

咱是要饭的，得跪着。那么题目就别那么复杂，首尾都用实词，虚词别那么多幺蛾子。「An Adventure of Mine」, 横竖挑不出毛病。

同时，题目必须完全契合内容。内容是学生会通知，就不要企图玩火操作。一个"Notice"就说明白了。

如果还要追求完美，题目可以化用一些英文世界的名言或成语，如果阅卷人看的出来那就赚爆，形成了玩梗者之间的默契。即使看不出来，经典的语言看起来也会很简洁有力，一样增加了印象分。比如命题是倡导环保（桑伯格狂喜），那题目就可以是 Let's Heal the World。相信不会有英语从业者没听过 MJ。注意！！！！这一条仅建议稳 140+的考生使用，如果操作不慎极易翻车。

二、格式

格式和题目一样，都是最基本的要素。同理，没有太大操作空间，注意不出错就好。

1.书信：最常见的作文体裁。开头 Dear，结尾 yours，不再赘述。

注意写给谁——别笑，血的教训。题目中给出 Peter 或 editor 还好处理，但收信人身份姓名均不明确时，一定要谨慎。最常见的是 Dear sir or madam，严防死守，毫无破绽（不要假定性别！中国不讲政治正确，但英语文化讲！这不是玩笑！）。Attention！我们小班高二第一次月考时 2/3 的同学因为不会写 madam 吃过亏，这种错误是致命的。如果放在高考，自求多福吧。

Dear 套完近乎再如何操作才能抓人眼球？后面得体和句式板块会有例子详谈。

书信体最后一段一定要简短有力，收束全文（事实上大多数文章都应该如此）。最后秀一把，让打分者再奶一口。这点我也会在后面得体和句式板块再谈到，这里不多说。

yours 后面我习惯加 faithfully，反正不放过一切上分机会。

最后署上事儿精 Li Hua。

2.演讲稿

常见开头：ladies and gents, may I have your attention please?

我喜欢的：What a nice day, ladies and gents? Today I'd like to talk about……

中间靠后部分最好有表达主题的总结句，比如 Hence, I appeal to all of us to……

结尾 thank u for ur time,礼貌得体。

3.通知

没有称呼，直接进入文章。注意通知发布者一般不是个人，所以不要开头 I'm Li Hua, president of SU.

第一人称处尽量用 we。

结尾署上通知单位和通知时间。通知时间要早于文中提起过的 deadline 时间。

三、书写

高考作文给分十分玄学的一大原因就是书写。在电子屏幕上，任何缺点都会成倍放大。字迹潦草的话那么 18/25 乃至 16/25 就是你的天花板。因为没有人在汗流浃背拼命赶工的情况下会对一份看起来不讨喜的文章产生任何一点同情。反之亦然，一手漂亮的衡水体赏心悦目，得分会至少比同水平的作文高出 2-3 分。

但毕竟不是人人都能练出衡水体，答主本人确实也不能（捂脸）。那么请记住，你的字可以不漂亮，但一定要工整，不影响阅读。不要连笔，不要花体，不要有涂改。如果卡这个标准，至少不会白白丢分。

屏摄自高中同学优秀作文。作者是上次评论区里的口嗨怪@之北之南，今天爷就是要挂你，还不给版权费。

如果能做到这样子已经很不错了。不是标准衡水体，但绝对工整，看起来赏心悦目不影响信息获取。

四、语法

语法这个问题太大了。时态语态主被动，主谓一致非谓动，宾前状后非限定，虚拟倒装逻辑性……这都是高压线。还有——句子不要罗列！很多人犯这个大忌！一个句号或叹号或问号内只能容忍一套主谓（and but 这种另说）！引爆一处，18 分以下，两处，15 不保。这时候，你玩不玩手法秀不秀操作，已经不重要了。因为没有人会再去看。

也就是我们老师说的，硬伤，致命伤。

这个问题其实没什么好说的。语法功夫在平时，不要有赌徒心理。

高三时会有人发生高原反应——连最基本的语法项都产生动摇（其实说到底还是基础不扎实）。高三上半年期末，同桌陈某英语滑铁卢，其中作文仅得十二分。

我看的第一眼：I'm Li Hua, who am interested in……（统一回复:am 的搭配主语只有 I，这里 who 代值 Li Hua，且 who am 不奇怪吗……）

我：……

他瞪着一双呆萌的眼睛，说，Li Hua 就是我，用 am 怎么了……

他的字还很潦草。老师看了，说，你这作文要是落我手里，还想要 12？8 分都没有。

后来此君得一雅号：陈十二郎。

此次惨案有史为证，就是韩愈那篇著名的《祭十二郎文》。

五、篇幅

高考作文说是 100 词左右，实则大有讲究。

1.宏观上，正文部分要 3 段 11-12 行左右（包括因回车产生的空白），答题区剩余 1 行半是最好状态。剩多剩少，感观上给人以字数不达标之感——尽管阅卷人知道你字数合格（肉眼计数，很准，不要怀疑），整体感观不佳仅仅是个人写字过小或过大的结果，但还是会扣分。

每行 9-11 词（过多，字数会超，过少，会被判定为恶意凑字，后果很严重），词与词间 1-1.5 个字母的距离。开头要简洁有力，两行到三行，过多的话（四行及以上）阅卷人会敏锐地觉察到你的语言过于臃肿，简洁度太差，得分会很难看（这点很致命）。

2.微观上，7-8 句话解决战斗。3 短 4 长或 5 长。

短句做必要的信息推动、润滑（这点在讲流利度时会再次提到），完成无法秀操作的信息点，同时给读者阅读时喘息的机会（长短合理搭配效果惊人 阅卷人感受方面会再次提到）。短句用得得体、地道，优势不输于长句。

长句是传统意义上重武器，show time，各显神通的地方。句式方面再谈。

推荐 2+4+1 或 2+4+2 或 2+5+1 的布局。每个加数分别对应开头、中间或结尾的句数。

一套下来，字数将精准控制在 110-115 之间。

辅以工整的书写，给人的第一感觉会十分 nice。让阅卷人心动的第一步已经完成。

六、语体（重头戏开始了）

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英语写作——不靠模板靠逻辑，因为英语是逻辑语言，不是模板语言，逻辑是英语的灵魂。具体阐述如下。

首先，学习英语写作必须会应用英文五个句型及其扩展句应用：1.主语+系动词+主语补足语（表语）；2.主语+谓语（+状语）；3.主语+谓语+宾语；4.主语+谓语+直宾+间宾；5.主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语；6.以上1到5句子的扩展句子。

其次，英语写作思路，使用英语逻辑思维写作英语作文得高分。英语因为是逻辑语言，不是模板语言，逻辑是英语的灵魂。所以按照英语逻辑思维的四种思维方法写作英语作文，即：①一因一果，②一因多果，③多因一果，④多因多果。其表达的最基本的形式——以提示观点句为中心，左找原因，右找结果。这样一步一步推理写作英语作文——写出的英语作文就完全符合以英语为母语的人写作英语的标准了。为此英语写作步骤和实例作文分述如下：

写好大考英语作文，你需要考虑的思路是——根据主题，由四个部分所构成如下：

1说出主题；2主题产生的原因；3主题产生的结果；4达到这种结果应该采取什么措施，这四个问题阐述清楚了，就OK了。其表达形式是“2原因←1主题→3结果→4措施”

比如，1主题：“我爱学习英语”，2原因：你要说出什么原因促使你爱学英语：⑴、⑵、⑶…，3结果：还要说爱学英语有什么结果⑴、⑵、⑶…，4措施：你要说学好英语采取的措施是什么？⑴、⑵、⑶…，这就是写英语作文具体的提纲。

举一个实际例子：

1主题是“汤姆用中文表演节目感到兴奋”→Tom is excited about performance in Chinese.

2主题产生的原因是“为学习中国社会现代文化知识”→He acquires the modern-culture knowledge about the society in China.

3主题产生的结果是“因此在他看来,完美地说中文是有帮助的”→, that finds it helpful for him to speak perfectly in Chinese.

4达到这种结果的措施是“这样能用中文在中国公司发展一种坦诚交流的文化”→,…successful to develop a culture of open communication with Chinese Company in Chinese.

上述1主题、2原因、3结果和4措施的英语句子是怎么写出来的呢？请看如下说明：

1写主题句：使用五类逻辑句式之一单句→主 + 系+ 表 （表：形容词或动词+ ed 加 介词短语）→作为五类逻辑单句或每类有多个延伸句之一，即：→Tom is excited about performance in Chinese.→汤姆用中文表演节目感到兴奋。

2写原因句：使用五类逻辑句式之一单句→主+谓+宾+介词短语→作为五类逻辑单句或每类有多个延伸句之一，即：→He acquires the modern-culture knowledge about the society in China.→他学习中国社会现代文化知识。

3写结果句：使用五类逻辑句式之一单句→主+谓+宾（=名/代词+ to 动词）→作为五类逻辑单句或每类有多个延伸句之一，即：→, that finds it helpful for him to speak perfectly in Chinese.→在他看来,完美地说中文是有帮助的。

4写措施句：使用五类逻辑句式之一单句→主+谓+宾（=名/代词+ to 动词）→作为五类逻辑单句或每类有多个延伸句之一的简略式，即：→,…successful to develop a culture of open communication with Chinese Company in Chinese.→这样能用中文在中国公司成功发展一种坦诚交流的文化。

上述主题、原因、结果和措施的英语句子汇总如下：

Acquiring the modern-culture knowledge about the society in China, Tom is excited about performance in Chinese, that finds it helpful for him to speak perfectly in Chinese and successful to develop a culture of open communication with Chinese Company in Chinese.（为学习中国社会现代文化知识，汤姆用中文表演节目感到兴奋。因此在他看来,完美地说中文是有帮助的,这样能用中文在中国公司成功发展一种坦诚交流的文化。）

这种写提纲的道理是——英语是逻辑语言，逻辑就是推理。类似写英语作文的提纲，如写其他主题也是如此。写作以“为考上一所好高中，我决定不玩手机了” 为题，“我”给笔友TOM写英文电子邮件告诉他这件事。

使用“原因句+提示句+结果句”模式，即“因为…所以…”模式写出英语表达——内容、思维、逻辑和语法，“四位一体”，便“有词儿写，有词儿知道怎么写”如下英语作文了。

分别写了两篇作文：（1）是中等水准；（2）中上等水准。

看（1）中等水准

Dear Tom,

How is everything going? Recently, I find it necessary for me to get ready for high-school entrance examination (H.E.E.) by acquiring too much knowledge about lessons honestly to give up the use of my smartphone at present.

This helps me make an important decision on trying to give up my smartphone. It waste my time, and it lets my eyes become bad. So I try my best to let it get out of my lives. I will never take my lessons until at later time in which to concentrate more on smartphone, without giving up halfway.

All the best !

Yours

Li Hua

看（2）中上等水准

Dear Tom,

Being your friend as one of high-school students, I write you a letter telling you about an important decision I made on giving up the use of my smartphone at present.

Thinking about this, you are likely to find it necessary for me to get ready for high-school entrance examination (H.E.E.) by acquiring too much knowledge about lessons honestly.

Smartphone is expected to be without the influence on me, that helps save so much time for me to work hard at studying lessons, on which to bring me to focus automatically in H.E.E., not always in pleasure or relaxation.

Without making me uneasy about neither reading some message nor receiving news by watching videos，all，from my smartphone in the beginning, I am always asking my teachers for questions about such lessons as Math, Chemistry or English, etc. and discussing them with my classmates.

Combining with this, at home, I have my smartphone kept in their closet or drawer which my parents are enabled to put in key, according to their views.

The above encourages me to achieve a well-ideal goal successfully of being one of high-school students days to come surely.

All the best !

Yours

Li Hua

上述中等水准和中上等水准英语作文，均用逻辑思维法写作出来，这样避免“模板套作痕迹”出现，有助于大考判（阅）卷老师给考生——提档次升分数！

要做到被升档次加分数，考生就不能把提示翻译出来再加个模板写作英语作文了。逻辑思维是英文写作把很多背后的知识，如提示句背后涵义内容得挖掘出来，像是原因和结果或措施等。

如果不知道逻辑思维知识，只能把若干个提示直接翻译（“成活率”难说）最后只能再“凑”很多虚的模板了事，因此不能称之为英语作文。

英文逻辑思维写作之原理：英文是逻辑语言，逻辑是英语的灵魂，它不是模板语言。现在模板套作把学生宝贵时间和巨大努力都白白浪费掉了。

因此四种逻辑思维循环使用，是英语写作得高分管用（非常“解渴”）的办法。

由此看来，英语作文必然出现创新成果，如上（2）中上等水准英文。这样才能凝聚起英语写作内容和逻辑匹配的价值和精彩。

模板写作英语，大考判阅卷老师见到，就给予降档次扣分数没商量。因为是“千胞胎万胞胎”，跟模具刻出来的一样的文章。那么等于考生没动脑筋写文章。所以不称之为英语作文。

使用英语逻辑思维写作英语得高分——期待给大考生带来：称心如意得高分的英语作文方法给考生带来实实在在的地提升英语写作能力得高分！

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